Carnival of the Dark

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    Carnival of the Dark
    Lit by shallow moon
    Caressed by absent lover
    Held by angry thoughts
    Waiting for the eclipse

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    Serzi commented on Carnival of the Dark

    07-27-2009

    I can relate to these thoughts. Whether they go further than the resemblance to my own does not matter. You have left me breathless by saying so much with few words. POWERFUL.
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    drewking commented on Carnival of the Dark

    02-14-2009

    few woeds, says so much,, great pice of work...
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    Spacer commented on Carnival of the Dark

    02-12-2009

    SImple....KOol...Poem...
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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