On The Brink

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    On The Brink
    I doubt.

    I rage.

    I hate.

    I loath.

    I piece together my shattered soul.

    I reach out and have no hold.

    I see empty space;

    And call it home.

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    tinamgoode commented on On The Brink

    11-21-2009

    This Is A "ROCKIN" Write! The feeling is piercing! TY PEACE & SMILES...
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    drewking commented on On The Brink

    02-16-2009

    so sad,,to see the hurt inside someone.. great piece of work...
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    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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