CHAINS

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  • Passion

    CHAINS

     BOUND BY CHAINS

        CHAINS OF LOVE AND FAMILY,
     
    CHAINS OF HATE AND SORROW AND CHAOS

       TEARING INTO MY FLESH
     
    TIGHTER THEY GRIP

       NOT KNOWING MY FATE

    ANGELS TRAIT, DEVILS BAIT

       CHAINS RIPPING AGAINST MY BLOODY HEART

    STABBING WITH THEIR POISON DARTS

       VENOM STREAMING THROUGH MY VEINS

    KNOWING GOD WILL TAKE IT WITH A GRAIN

        NO MORE WILL I FEEL THE PAIN

    BREAKING THE CHAIN ALL THAT's LEFT IS WHAT's TO GAIN...

           HIS NAME IS NOT IN VEIN

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    BigDaddyCash commented on CHAINS

    11-04-2009

    Thank you for joining my group of friends I pleased to have you as a friend. Real success begins with a friend and everything else in life is a bonus. If your dreams and desires are to become rich and famous and you set your goals to make this your main purpose in life, what good would it all be without friends? You should treat a friendship like a rose garden, feed it with love, kindness and understanding and watch it blossom into a beautiful rose. There is nothing more valuable than a true friend, all other successes in your life's journey mean nothing if you can't share them with a friend. LOL, BDC P.S. Let's see some of your magical creations. What I've read shows great talent
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    megallanah

    11/04/2009

    aww thanks i actually just started wrinting like crazy a few months ago... i never thought i had the talent but after i was reading back i was actually surprized that some sounded somewhat good. :)

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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