Christina's Eyes

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    jfy chris. thanks for inviting me here!!! :)

    Christina's Eyes

    these blue eyes, their unfathomable depth
    remind me of the endless skies
    the gateway to your soul remains
    where your deepest expression lies

    a thousand words, from grief to bliss
    i see in the pupil of your eyes
    your love for sharks, and metal, retains
    and shows your hidden devilish ties

    much souls of words floating around
    caught and scripted by your hands
    in your poems of nearby waters
    and your poems of distant lands

    your hands seem fluid as a flowing river
    as flexibly free as a swift skater
    well, that is all i say for now
    much more flattery awaits you later
    :P jus kidding

    thanks Christina!!! :)
    loved this site, and your poems :))

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    brokenhearted11 commented on Christina's Eyes

    12-13-2010

    haha what sweet poem this is, and quite relateable at that. good job, hoping to see more of your work up later? keep writing xD

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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