Classifieds

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    Classifieds

    Fire in your eyes at the very first glance.
    Let the sound of my voice put your mind in a trance.
    Gimme a sec of your time so you could hear,
    me spit some of this sweet, romantic shit in your ear.
    I'm not like your choices of this generation.
    A cut above the rest w/o any speculation.
    I'll wine, and dine and treat you like a natural woman,
    they say chivalry is dead, i say it's only just begun.
    Lemme caress your body with hands so gentle and sure,
    drop all your worries cause I'm bound to have the cure.
    For whatever stresses you face in your day.
    All that you desire is but a call away.
    A boyish charm, the mind of Einstein, and respect like no other
    all that and more you'll find in this cool, calm, sophisticated brotha
    An evening with me and I'm sure you'll agree,
    what I speak is not fiction but in fact reality.
    And when the nights over and all is said and done,
    You'll be ready for more when the morning comes!

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    BDIsernhagen commented on Classifieds

    06-03-2009

    your use of the vernacular like "brotha" shocked me at first, as I am usd to seeing it in poetry, but it made me re-read the lines, then the poem, so I mulled over it some more and found some deeper undercurrents in it. thank you for posting.

    teachertasha commented on Classifieds

    05-14-2009

    Well... Very talented. U have a way with words.

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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