Cold Light

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    gets kinda mucked toward the end

    Cold Light

    The old man in the corner just died
    no one noticed until instead of eyes their were fly's
    And as flames his soul did burst
    the piper paid the toll
    to cross the river Styx
    to find on the other side
    all his relatives who'd died
    except the old one who he had cherished
    with a totem of dogwood
    and one incense
    only aged 5
    now at 30 he asked them why
    they said needing
    not prayers but one
    could save them from demons tongues
    and make them feathered ones
    so cold and so bright
    it defeats fires light
    and with rod and trident they do clash
    lent down by their fathers wrath
    they both stand to gain and none will lose
    but the two who hold them do
    for each others souls they must fight to
    pass an unaged test
    then maybe have their rest
    when fathers dreamt the test
    after the rest of three worlds
    above below and between fighting endlessly
    for humanity for the right to the most powerful weapon
    known in their land
    and while they fight endlessly
    we're in command
    but till when they have passed the test

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    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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