Cold love

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    Random poetry that keep me awake at night, I write a lot when I can't sleep.

    Cold love

    Yet his shadow will mist into ice of stone

    Through emerald opened eyes with green bends

    We cheered fast and hailed now

    And both perched strong glittering love

    In grey we grew and both split

    Followed around south

    His hold came growled , roared and steered over me

    Higher than the wings of wide

    And they merry bright fog-smoked drifted

    Inside the thoughts of us all 

     

     

    ~Kaylyn (c)  9/10/09

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    lithiumblack commented on Cold love

    10-07-2009

    Again, very beautiful and visual. You're a rare talent, and I look forward to reading more of your work. Keep 'em coming!

    Phoenix9 commented on Cold love

    10-07-2009

    interesting, i like the way it is worded and the picture it paints

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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