Come Inside

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    Come Inside

    .Come inside this darkened place where memories live and hatred waits.
    Come inside my comfort zone my protector and my lifetime home.
    Come inside this empty heart and fill me with this thing called"love".
    Come insdie this shell of a woman and fill me with your lifelong dreams.
    Come inside and feel my pain and see the scars that still remain.
    Come inside this place called "me" a place I hope to oneday leave.

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    Plot121 commented on Come Inside

    11-20-2008

    This was a good poem. abit short but the message the flow was very neatly done good work. Plot121

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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