crazy/love

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    crazy/love

     what would you think if i told you i still think about my ex
    even though i still say i love you
    i feel your memories won't fade but you love will all thanks to you 
    i'm tired of waiting for you and i know the day i walk away from you
    they day i found someone new will the day you'll tell i'm your true love 
    you'll only get one chance to make it right because i won't do this again 
    all i wanted was to do with you and now all want is walk away from you
    if you truly loved me then why i'm i here alone and hurting waiting on you
    i wish i didn't still love you will all my heart

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    suziegray commented on crazy/love

    06-17-2010

    Poetry is artwork, this is true, and as artists we are not required to follow the rules of grammar, however, in order to not detract from your message, I suggest reading your poem aloud to find small errors. For example your line "if you truly loved me then why i'm i here alone" you probably meant "if you truly loved me then why am i here alone?"
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