Da Sweetest Girl

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    Da Sweetest Girl

    Shorty was his 80% but treated her more like she was da 20%
    Stressed da fuck out got her weight up and down hair falling out.
    Shorty woulda did anything for dat nigga
    shoulda did everything to keep her
    She use to be the sweetest girl ever
    You got me waiting
    constantly debating
    should I stay or should I go I don't know
    honey trust me jealousy ain't even da issue
    y please everybody knows that bitch ain't got nothing on me
    so to that hoe get down on ya knees
    and show respect to the queen
    Baby boy knew @ da age sixteen he was gon wife me
    he made me queen put a rock on my left hand
    and promise never to puff my pretty brown eyes
    Baby boy called me his rib
    In my place you could never stand cuz I'm on my grown woman
    so to that hoe,bitch this is mine go get ya own!
    How I look letting some bitch come fuck up my home
    Our love is like blue it stay true
    my honey,my love,my boo
    in my heart he will always have a place to call home
    I love you

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    ginga commented on Da Sweetest Girl

    06-21-2010

    penny, A powerful poem about the coming of age and I particularly like the line: "Baby boy called me his rib" ginga

    xxlheart commented on Da Sweetest Girl

    03-18-2009

    i would call it slam poetry and i would call it excellent! it pops at ya and sticks in your head. you can write and you can do it with style!

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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