Dance By the Sea

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Dance By the Sea

Oh! How I do love him,
My heart and soul declares!
For within him is a greatness and kindness to which few can begin to compare!
Oh! What a wonderful privilage,
that he may love me!
For all my life i cannot think of what I've done to make this come to be!
e dance the dance of many much older and wiser than we.
But that doesn't matter to us.
No! It doesn't matter to me!
So we dance our dance, throwing caution to the wind, as our feet are lapped by the sea.

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Godsgang commented on Dance By the Sea

07-22-2009

Full of love and feeling, It very good , but pehaps a little unbalanced and could be more discriptive. the pangs of youthful love yet little about him, or why you love him

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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