Dance with you forever

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    Dance with you forever

    Dance with me in love
    Dance with me in life
    When did enduring love begin?
    The day we became man and wife

    There is patience and understanding
    We try to be unselfish and kind
    Though not a fairy-tale romance
    No greater love will we find

    Sharing dreams, passions, and desires
    Building each other up when we fall
    We've learned to say I'm sorry
    And I love you through it all

    Our two hearts beat as one
    Cherishing what we have from above
    Dance with me forever
    Dance me to the end of love

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    Kaiprin commented on Dance with you forever

    12-01-2009

    Cool Poem. It made me think of George Michael's 'Careless Whisper' for some reason, but you must really have been in a good place when you wrote this. Good energy is a great thing. Add me a friend.
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    batoka commented on Dance with you forever

    11-06-2009

    i feel the excitment in ur words ,it's really nice when u in love makes u feel like there is no other person in the world but u two.
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    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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