Death is...

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    Death is...

    Death is when your loved ones must part.
    Death is a sharp pain to the heart.
    Death is a feeling of permanent sadness and pain.
    Death is when your loved ones have forever gone away.
    Death is a call to heaven or hell.
    Dath is an eternal mansion or cell.
    Death is a lesson to learn about.
    Death is a loss, without a doubt.
    Death is an unhappy feeling to have.
    Death is unpleasant on anyone's behalf.
    Death is something we all will go through.
    Death is a storm waiting to brew.
    Death is a lingering crow always overhead.
    Death is a soul, done being fed...

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    starfox115 commented on Death is...

    01-27-2010

    great 14 liner. Only one thing, i hate how it ends. Remember in poetry your poems must have a conclusion just like a story. this poem ends without a conclusion. other that that, its a great poem. ill give you an 8

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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