Deborah My Lynne

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    Deborah My Lynne
    Ah, "Do you love me?" you say? Bleeding heart
    of that I cherish doth my love impart!
    Abysmal fire is burning deep within
    a dream of you, O Deborah my Lynne.

    An ocean billows sunny days and then,
    Reflecting shiny waters back of when
    our sparkling romance that our love have been!
    I always love you, Deborah my Lynne.

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    dumplin commented on Deborah My Lynne

    12-03-2009

    Lucky girl, no doubt! This is a very nice style of writing! Loved it! Please read some more of my work. Especially the ones I just posted. Thanks for your comments.
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    JacLiz2 commented on Deborah My Lynne

    09-14-2009

    Please feel free to leave comments for my poems at : http://www.originalpoetry.com/poet/jacliz2
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    JacLiz2 commented on Deborah My Lynne

    09-14-2009

    This is very nice and from the heart. A true feeling of love for someone.
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    MizBlaze commented on Deborah My Lynne

    11-14-2008

    This is nice...
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    IntensorPoet commented on Deborah My Lynne

    10-30-2008

    This is my first iambic pentameter poem.
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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