Deception

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Deception

The water rushes over me,
Sweet surrender.
It's unbarebly cold,
But I feel no longer.
Hope was taken long ago,
Along with it my heart and soul.
It's the only way,
So here I go.
Along with the tides,
Aimlessly floating along.

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ISWASALWAYS commented on Deception

11-02-2009

Few words so sweetly put upon a page, drifting aimlessly. Your inner beauty is ever so present your heart can bare the ever crashing waves of time.

charmed

11/02/2009

The title Deception is perfect because even the words are decieving

tommygun commented on Deception

04-18-2009

Wouldn't it be nice to just drift though life with no direction letting the tide pull us?

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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