Desert Depression

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    Desert Depression

    Look out over this post, the same scene.
    Waiting to go home, and see trees so green
    Long ago, saw the recruiting poster,
    Gone now, days of a jokerster.
    The Marine Corps, nothing I thought it would be,
    Like a credit card with a hidden fee.
    Used to live for adventure, loved the thrill
    Now to stay alive, it takes more than skill.
    Dust in our eye,
    Memories enough to make men cry.
    Waiting for the day to come back,
    The order to fill your sack.
    Ah, Iraq. It makes me sick,
    Now its more than just a flick.
    Was it worth it?
    Maybe, one day when I look back on it.
    When I have the time to sit.
    For now, I huddle to the ground.
    My heart will soon cease to sound.

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    heavensdaughter commented on Desert Depression

    01-15-2010

    I am sorry, this poem hurts (me) personally cause my best buddy a united state marine was killed in iraq 11/8/04 I wonder if he felt as this, I am sorry you have to be there and pray your well, if you need any care package items to make that time pass a bit quicker please dont' hesitate to leave me a message, God bless you and stay safe marine.

    bforibus commented on Desert Depression

    01-25-2009

    very raw look of the flipside of the coin

    PrecientPoet commented on Desert Depression

    01-25-2009

    I'm sorry, it is our fault.

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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