DOUBLE CONSCIENCE

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    DOUBLE CONSCIENCE

    DOUBLE CONSCIENCE

    WE LIVE IN A WORLD FULL OF GOOD AND BAD(A WORLD OF CONFUSION),WE PRAY FOR HOPE AND HAPPINESS-BUT,DEAL WITH PROBLEMS AND ILLUSIONS.

    WE PRETTY MUCH KNOW WHAT'S WRONG AND WHAT'S RIGHT,BUT SOMETIMES- THE TWO INTERTWINE,AND LEAVES US THINKING HOW CAN SOMETHING SO WRONG FEEL SO RIGHT.

    THE TEMPTATION, OF LIFE'S COMPLICATIONS, SET US ASIDE FROM POSITIVE SITUATIONS--SO,SOMETIMES OUR HEARTS SPEAKS DIFFERENTLY FROM OUR MINDS,AND THIS IS HOW LIFE'S CONFUSION BEGIN TO COMBINE.

    WE HAVE THE FEELING TO DO WHAT'S RIGHT,BUT DUE TO THE CHALLENGES WE BARE IN LIFE,SOMETIMES IT'S HARD TO JUST DO RIGHT--SO,INSTEAD OF TALKING WE CHOOSE TO FIGHT,INSTEAD OF UNITING WE CHOOSE TO DIVIDE,IT'S JUST THAT CONFUSION THAT LIES INSIDE.

    THIS IS OUR CONSCIENCE THAT WE'RE FACED WITH IN LIFE,SO YOU TELL ME,HOW DO WE DECIDE-TO AVOID WRONG DOING-WHEN BAD CAN FEEL SO GOOD AND AT TIMES WRONG CAN FEEL SO RIGHT.

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    Savant commented on DOUBLE CONSCIENCE

    11-13-2009

    You speak of the human condition. If it wasn't for that stupid apple we would be all good right now!!! Great piece. I like how it rambles and hits the same points numerous times. It reads exactly how the human mind works...in circles. I don't know if that was by design but I like it none the less. If you get some time, check me out... Got a hot one called Corners you might like.

    Qualin commented on DOUBLE CONSCIENCE

    07-26-2009

    GOOD POEM THE ANSWER IS EASY WE ARE BORN TO LOVE SIN AS WE ARE SIN UNTILL WE MAKE OUR SELVES RIGHT ...I AM LIKE PAUL THE BIGGEST OF ALL...IF ONLY I HAD DONE WHAT I KNEW TO DO...INSTEAD OF DOING WHAT I WANTED TO....GOOD POEM GAL...QUALIN

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