Drifting~

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  • Death

    Drifting~

    I waited for her to come,
    To interupt my thoughts-to comfort me.
    But she never came.

    Anger swelled as pain suffocated me,
    Dreched in agony,
    waiting...

    Time passed by slowley,
    As i wallowed in pain.
    All the time-crying...

    Surley somebody had to care,
    If anybodyeven stopped to pay attention,
    To my broken heart.

    And in that moment,
    As the sun set outside the window,
    Sinking behind the highway...

    I knew what to do then,
    If i was dying,
    She would have to die to.

    Satisfied with this thought,
    I thought of a plan,
    Because it wouldnt be a secret...

    I wanted everyone to know,
    It was me,
    Who killed her.

    Gathering my things together,
    I came across an un-opened note.
    Curiosity overcame me.

    Opening it, trying not to cover it in blood,
    I saw it.
    My name which I had long forgotten.

    My heart ached,
    I didn't have much time left to think.
    My hands shook.

    I lost controll.
    Pain and anger took over.
    She HAD to die.

    12am,
    She was sleeping soundly.
    As I silently let mysef in.

    Unnoticed,
    I killed the dogs peacfuly,
    Without sorrow or pain.

    Then I crept,
    Over to her side,
    and in one little moment,

    Both our lives
    were over.
    With one little click.

    ~Charlene Douglas~


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    PRober commented on Drifting~

    07-20-2009

    a sick mind is a terrible thing to waste? lol! a little click, and a BIG BANG!

    dahlusion commented on Drifting~

    12-05-2008

    Death is not ugly, its shape arises out of the dark and drives deeper into our souls ——"without sorrow or pain".

    ivecute77 commented on Drifting~

    12-02-2008

    pretty good work keep them comming.

    Phoenix9 commented on Drifting~

    11-29-2008

    very dark, very good

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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