Drunken Sorrow

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Drunken Sorrow

Jungle is a man who showed a lot of respect and love.
His biggest problem wat that he drank too much.
He roamed the streets day and night.
Drunk as always hiding his pain and strife.
And no one knows of his struggles in life.
Things could be better if you could live twice.
He could have changed history by doing what was right.
We are born to die, that's what they say, right!
Death occurs everyday.
Life is too short to be wasted away.
So lets learn a lesson from the old man who passed away,
and handle your feelings in a better way.

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EvilTwin commented on Drunken Sorrow

06-14-2009

I really like this one. You have a great flow, and great rythem. Great job, and keep up the good work.

jenifer commented on Drunken Sorrow

06-14-2009

I use to drink for my sorrow ,but i quite and now i only drink once in awhile . life is lived once and only once for many and the world is full of beauty we need to learn to apriate it and love it for what it is ,for life is short and over way to soon. good job.

Chi commented on Drunken Sorrow

06-11-2009

yes my love I am a preacher in the arts of sobriety for life. and learning to deal with life good or bad with out alcohol drug or narcotic drug is facing you fears and all you demons on a level to win your very soul. I rate this poem a100 because it so real for the world today and human , man made crisis of our times. stay real and sober Chi.

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