Day Dreaming

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  • Love

    Day Dreaming

    Day dreaming of you.
    Who are you?
    I see you everywhere,
    and i don't know what to do.
    When i day dream,
    I talk to you.
    But when i don't
    The talking is hard to do.
    You are so amazing,
    and I'm into you.
    There are things i want to say,
    But they can't get through
    I see you everywhere.
    I'm day dreaming of you.

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    Swann commented on Day Dreaming

    06-14-2009

    I like the feel of this poem, and it easily relatable. I have felt this way before about a girl. Really good job capturing being loss in thought about someone.

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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