ELEVENTH COMMANDMENT

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    ELEVENTH COMMANDMENT

    Domestic violence I'm speaking on this subject again when God created the commandments he forgot to add this one in thou should not hit mate we hall have our own opionions and sometimes disagree does not mean you can put your hands on me I guess he hadn't planned that in the last days control would be out of his hands men beating up on women and women beating up on men causing families to separate leaving our children victims in the end  looking for love in all the wrong places empty dreams sad faces no morales no more time to teach daddy on crack momma prostituting on the streets I remember growing up it was oh so sweet it was yes Sir yes Mamm to every adult on the street and the little homies speak out and say Reggie where are you from things have changed this can never be and with a simple reply I say gracefully Alabama is where I from country grammer I have none raised in the south to be a man and to never hit anyone especially a woman the law of the land.



    This poem was dedicated to Chris Brown, Rihanna.


    Reggie Aka:HELLOWORLD  ENJOY!

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    joanna commented on ELEVENTH COMMANDMENT

    12-01-2010

    the message is simple and this message hits home and it hits it hard!!!! nice

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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