empty world

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    empty world

    As I walk down the street of this empty world I see a world that cry out for help, but no one can hear it. I see a mother watch her son get shoot in the back, as he yelled out mom, all she can do is cry, cry for he being in the wrong place at the wrong time, as she put her head up to the sky and ask god why he have to take her only son away from her. I went over to her and put my hand on her should and tell her that everything will be ok and Set next to and cry with her. As I walk down the street of this empty world I wonder if there will ever be peace, as I walk I see a girl that sell her body for the love she never had, I ask her did you find the love you been searching for, she say no, I feel lost, I feel like no one cares. As look in her eyes I feel her pain and then I told her that I love her and care for her and I will do anything for her, because all she need is for someone to love her and care for her. As I walk down the street of this empty a pray for a better one. As I walk down this empty world

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    Hampton commented on empty world

    06-18-2009

    You did a masterful job of expressing your thoughts and interpretation of a world that can be very uncaring. See my poem "Gods visit"

    hdmac commented on empty world

    06-16-2009

    It is good to pray for this world. Sadly this world is going to keep on getting worse before Christ returns.

    cliftondurant commented on empty world

    05-06-2009

    THIS IS A BEAUTIFUL POEM YOU HAVE A GOOD HEART IT MEAN A LOT WHEN PEOPLE CARE I JUST WANT TO LET YOU KNOW THAT I CARE

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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