Endured

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    Endured
    Internal pain,
    Is an extreme drain;
    Time will always run out,
    There should never be any doubt,
    You will drive yourself insane,
    Wondering if you must refrain;
    Know your voice must be heard,
    Especially after all you have endured.

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    jpmaster13 commented on Endured

    03-30-2010

    I like it, though it seems like your trying to rhyme the words, rather then just let poetry flow through ya.
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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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