erotic bliss

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    erotic bliss

    wadeing beneath the waves of pleasure
    hopeing to find my secret treasure
    intoxicated with your kiss
    your natural aroma is erotic bliss
    touching you all my senses come alive
    so i make all my motions with pride
    pleasuring you pleasures me
    its like a drug addicting me
    tasteing your sweet necture
    drives me faster
    your breath blowing harder
    i can feel your body release
    from my grip with ease
    drunken by the puddles of pleasure
    we drink some more.................
    to find our treasure.

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    Mareann commented on erotic bliss

    11-01-2009

    Very good writing, great expression, good job... Mareann

    IAMLIKEU commented on erotic bliss

    05-17-2009

    VERY NICE. IT IS GREAT YOU HAVE THE FREEDOM TO EXPRESS YOURSELF SO FREELY ON THIS SUBJECT. THE PASSION COMES OUT IN YOUR CHOICE OF WORDS.

    FLAWLES commented on erotic bliss

    05-15-2009

    I like your flow; and I want some-mo. Can you cure my desire, since you have me on fire?

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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