ever loving you

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    ever loving you

    before the morning's misty eye
    can penetrate the budding sky
    with starlit streams from yesternigh
    I kiss the softness of your sigh

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    angel33614 commented on ever loving you

    06-14-2010

    Sometimes the most meaningful and complex of things can be held in the smallest of packages. Your poem is a perfect representation of this notion, short and sweet but dripping emotion! A beautiful potrayal of lost love remebered with the sweetness of a kiss. A Beautiful, poetic flower that comes into blood in the starlight of the night as the gentle rays of the moon caresses the soul. Purity of the soul, journey well!!! Angel

    WordSlinger commented on ever loving you

    06-07-2010

    Springieieie, this is short, and as large, as BP's bills now, ty WS

    Charlie23 commented on ever loving you

    04-05-2010

    Even your short pieces are very thought provoking. I like this one a lot!

    lunamarie commented on ever loving you

    03-31-2010

    ooooohhh ... is this love or what?! ............ Luna

    QueenotheKnight commented on ever loving you

    03-30-2010

    cute, short and sweet! :).......... thanks for sharing! ;)

    Springsize

    04/19/2010

    And how is my favorite dark Angel, dancing in LoveLight? I see your joy, spreading light that warm, all over cold ground...

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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