Everyone's a Critique

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    Everyone's a Critique

    everybody looks at me and thinks I should be sad.

    But I don't care what they think, I'm not feeling bad.

    Yes I know that he is gone.

    I won't cry and wine and moan.

    When I think of him I have to smile.

    Then I talk about him for a while.

    People always ask, "Why don't you cry?"

    and I just have to ask them, "Why?"

    He was never sad, but was always happy.

    So even though he died, why can't I be?

    Everyone just has to be a critic,

    and have to tell me all this shit.

    I can do this one my own,

    why don't you just leave me alone?

    Try to rate me one more time,

    and you won't ever see that sun shine.

    I don't like being told what to do,

    so you can go cry, "boo hoo".

    try to rate me again,

    you won't know how to count from 1 to 10.

    I am not a movie to see,

    I am not going to be anyone but me!

    I am not some book to be read.

    You must have something wrong with your head!

    You ask me why I am so angry,

    you ask me why I am so mad.

    You ask me why I just don't cry,

    and all I have to say is, "You're dumb critics, that's why!"

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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

    solorose’s Poems (8)

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