Everything

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  • Sadness

    Everything
    Things are sad,
    People are crying,
    My life is falling apart.
    I'm sorry, so sorry,
    I have nothing happy to say.
    I'm crying, I'm crying,
    I've been crying all through today.
    I am sad.
    I am mad.
    I am filled with hate!
    Everything, everything is wrong when i am involved.
    Oh I am just a child,
    A homesick child-
    Crying alone in my world.

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    bandit1192 commented on Everything

    12-26-2008

    Title might be better as Alone In My World. Mainly because you give us a glimpse into your feelings about yourself. Hopefully it was just a bad day. keep writing.
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    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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