Eyes In The Dark
Eyes In The DarkLike huge, unblinking eyes
lights reflect from polished granite,
showing what I know
and yet fear each time to see:
all dates filled in,
cruelly engraved like my heart.
Eyes In The Dark
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- poetryrules
- My status is: I don't know what to put here?!
Like huge, unblinking eyes
lights reflect from polished granite,
showing what I know
and yet fear each time to see:
all dates filled in,
cruelly engraved like my heart.
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bandit1192 commented on Eyes In The Dark
12-03-2009
- I think I've read this 4or 5 times and I feel like I'm in a dream. What I keep seeing is a full moon, bright as the sun, illuminating the path ahead. There at the end of my path is a granite slab. A tombstone signifying the death of love? Good write, TS
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12/11/2009
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