Eyes

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    Eyes

    You are evil,plain and simple.
    When you open your mouth you spew venom.
    When I look at your face you can't even hide the hate in your eyes.
    You love to preach the word of god,
    but when it is told to you it must falls upon def ears.
    Your hands are small,
    but they are not afraid to swing and pull.
    When I look at youI try to hide my disgust for you,
    but even that is hard to hide.
    I will not hide my dislike for you anymore.
    So next time you see me you will see the hate in my eyes. 

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    laydbak1 commented on Eyes

    06-14-2009

    This voice tells a tale of deep seated disgust and feels a need for a bit of passive vengance for being wronged or spurned in some way... The problem is see is, it's speaking to the heart threw the eyes of someone without a soul... To never look in those eyes again, would be the worse dagger to be thrown... A good write...

    snowdove commented on Eyes

    06-04-2009

    oh wow scary but deep..goose bumps, i see your hate i feel your disgust,short but to the point. wow great work my friend

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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