fakes

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    fakes
    once in a world where 
    the water was green
    the was a girl who
    was named marleene
    she watched and waited
    for the day that she
    would take over that world
    and own the key
    the key that opened
    the big brown gate
    that led to the lake
    that filled you with hate
    if you arent careful
    the lake will take
    you down so fast
    you cant be a fake
    and if you try
    to get back up
    well youll be eating
    out of a cup
    because you are not
    dead or maybe just sore
    but you have been choked
    by that one single whore
    the whore who is called
    the big green lake
    not because she is sore
    but because she is a fake
    fakes dont deserve love
    and they dont deserve you
    so dont let one get one
    and make you one too
    once in a world where 
    the water was green
    the was a girl who
    was named marleene
    she watched and waited
    for the day that she
    would take over that world
    and own the key
    the key that opened
    the big brown gate
    that led to the lake
    that filled you with hate
    if you arent careful
    the lake will take
    you down so fast
    you cant be a fake
    and if you try
    to get back up
    well youll be eating
    out of a cup
    because you are not
    dead or maybe just sore
    but you have been choked
    by that one single whore
    the whore who is called
    the big green lake
    not because she is sore
    but because she is a fake
    fakes dont deserve love
    and they dont deserve you
    so dont let one get one
    and make you one too

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    koolmom0 commented on fakes

    10-15-2009

    Very cool story here hun, interesting. I'll be sure to stay away from that lake. Love Koolmom
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    possum

    10/15/2009

    thanks for reading it!!! love possum

    possum

    10/15/2009

    thanks for reading it!!! love possum

    bforibus commented on fakes

    10-15-2009

    i love this poem. it sounds like something my past girlfriend told me about my current one. crazy i know but this poem is great and the flow was outstanding
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    possum

    10/15/2009

    thanks again!

    MOMofTWINS commented on fakes

    10-15-2009

    Very interesting, Possum. A unique style of writting, and I like it. I also like that you left it vague enough for your reader to adapt it to fit their own story in a way. Very nice!
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    possum

    10/15/2009

    Thanks!

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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