Falling Melancholy

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My first poem on this site... I hope u guys like it :D

Falling Melancholy

Battalions of the see-through sea

              That future festeration show,
              Rejoice from free lifts, the laughing autumn gifts,
              Which the breezes unwind and grow.
              
              Movement of care delight trees with their flare

              And forget atrocity of snow.

              The city awakes as prime snowflakes

              Make the breath of tomorrow.

Such lasts for days, the gradual phase

Until rays appear once more.

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Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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