Untitled

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  • Dark Poetry

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    Have fun figuring this one out! I'm eager to hear your interpretation :)

    Untitled

     A moonlight mountain of darkest sand
    Endless terror embrace the land
    Billion eyes stare down upon
    The lives of man who live it wrong.

    Blackness, darkest of pitch
    Holds its cloak to protect worlds, which
    Know nothing of light, the sun,
    Only the mendacity of two making one.

    Darkness and light,
    Lie, accuse, fight
    Over flowers in our graceful mind
    That are pure, polished and refined.

    Death will torture, punish, hate,
    Life will laugh and recreate.

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    lorenzo commented on Untitled

    11-16-2011

    nice poem, i like it (i hope that didn't sound like your teacher, who said "good work")
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    QueenSpades

    11/16/2011

    I appreciate each feedback i get, nonetheless. Thanks :)

    boomboom56 commented on Untitled

    11-09-2011

    this sounds like the battle between good and evil, love and despair. it can be very confusing on which direction you want to go. Peace.
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    QueenSpades

    11/09/2011

    Thanks for liking my poem! You are right: it is a poem about a us not knowing which to respect more: the life we live now, or the final judgement that determines what we our life was worth. I actually wrote it for my school project, but my teacher couldn't make a comment except for 'good work!', which was actually quite depressing.

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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