Family

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This poems was one of the first 5 i worte lol. The family I am talking about was not my own but at one point of my life was more of a family to me then my own was. Its kinda half ass but there is alot of truth behind it

Family

A family together is better
Working the streets, making the chedder
An unexplainable bond
A friend, a confidant
A person to count on
Down in the mud
Closest of kin
Not even my blood
Never judged me because I am a stud
We run this shit
No room for a hating ass bitch
Fuck with us and we talk with fist
Ones we hate the most is a snitch
We run this game
Better then the baseball hall of fame
We ready to tame
Tame you
Some may rock red
But we roll blue
Nothing to say
Nothing to do
Most of all we care
What we got we share
This world may not seem fair
Sit back and we'll make you stare
We got love
Love that will make problems fly like doves
My brother, My sister
My grandma, My cuz
We ride or die
No reason to lie
You can player hate
But remember we going to fly

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rachelleann28 commented on Family

09-06-2009

I like this one!! I have always been real close to my family so I really enjoyed reading this one!!!

Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

supermancdr’s Poems (22)

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Letter To The First Born 0
I Want To Help You Fly 0
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Im Sorry Pt. 2 0
I Am Love 0
It's So Hard 0
Im Sorry 0
Don't Judge Me 0
My Son 0
Ghetto 0
What Do You See? 0
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For Real Dreams 2
The Hidden Love Inside 1
My Body 1
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My Father 1
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Dear God 1
I Remember... 1
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