Fate

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    Fate

    Roses are red violets are blue
    theres no better way to express my love for you
    if you love me follow me here
    to a room of love and great cheer
    for a suprise behind the door
    is greater then riches
    for what i hide is my love
    for you who i hold dear

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    mmichelle97219 commented on Fate

    02-16-2009

    A bit too somplistic, but not horrible. Not oustanding just okay. It is a good start to a longer piece. Happy Writing Michelle

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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