Visions

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    Visions
    My dreams show me
    that I can not hear
    The night shows me
    that I can not feel
    The shadow show me
    that I can not dream
    but my life revolves
    around what I do not think
    and that is why I do not blink
    for if I do I may lose you
    for life is to fast to let one think
    so I can only dream
    what it is I can not think!

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    dave005 commented on Visions

    02-10-2009

    well written, i like the emotions in this. also pretty insightful. well done
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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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