Fell in deep

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    Fell in deep


    Its like a desire in my belly
    Now this loves getting deep
    Soft whispers in my ear
    of words i shall not repeat
    Love is a big step
    unaware it was this steep
    I was pushed off loves hill into a place called paradise
    hope i don't hit concrete and you leave me with sleepless nights
    the thought of you leaving i must fight
    it brings me fright every time you step out my sight
    Plush pillows and silk sheets 
    that's how you know when you fell in to deep
    This kind of love makes me weak
    so weak, unable to speak
    Unable to eat, unable to breathe
    this loves got me sick just like a disease
    I sometimes wonder if this is real or a fantasy
    I sit and daydream about you laying next to me
    if this is real, I NEVER want it to end
    our relationship is one thing, ill always defend
    Now its gotten to deep
    You always said that it would
    so i must reassure you
    and make sure everything is understood
    I just had intentions to wet my feet
    Before i knew it.............I Fell in deep!

     

     

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    babyfire04 commented on Fell in deep

    06-10-2009

    this is such a romantic poem. A wonderful visual of falling in love. You definatily have a way with words.

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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