Feel me?

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    Feel me?

    When you look at me, what do you see?
    Look past your eyesight
    and TRULY FEEL ME
    Feel my heart, my soul and all my being
    I'm more than my looks
    I have purpose I have meaning
    Now don't get me wrong
    I do feel blessed
    To turn more heads than all the rest
    Let's say your head turns and you get my attention
    Can you keep me interested?.maybe even mention
    What's going on in the world.. or your relatioship with God
    What? I'm getting too deep?
    You'd rather show me your car?
    I truly care less about what you drive
    Right now I kinda wish I never said hi!
    Try impressing me without all your "things"
    All you have to show, I've already seen
    It's great you're educated, sexy and well spoken
    But will you get past my shell
    Or are you looking for a token?
    Just put it out there, let's keep it real
    Who am I to judge?
    I can't tell you how to feel
    But if that's what you want I really don't see
    You getting past this small encounter with me
    By now in my life I've grown and matured
    I'm not to be used, played or lured
    So NOW when you look at me what do you see?
    Have I turned you off?
    Or are you feeling me?
    Please keep in mind that we're keeping it real
    Who are you to judge?
    You can't tell me how to feel
    If you wanna keep it pushing it's perfectly fine
    Let me thank you in advance for not wasting my time
    NO I'm not angry
    NO I'm not rude
    You call me knowing what I want a woman with an attitude?!
    Don't get it twisted
    Let me make this clear
    A virtuous woman should be your last fear
    I'm hoping our talk atleast plants a seed
    One day you might even WANT what you need
    Since this ain't that day
    I'm gonna let you make it
    All this advice was free
    I hope that you take it

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    bforibus commented on Feel me?

    11-06-2009

    lol, i love these applications of replacements. they are so uniquely the author and each one is so interesting to read. either way, absolutely great job on the flow and the word play.

    Drivingczar commented on Feel me?

    04-15-2009

    Anyone that doesn't feel you after reading these open verses should get checked! Great write!

    chaneybaby

    12/13/2010

    thnx peeps! i appreciate the comments &&& the luv!

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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