Final Blow

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    Final Blow

    You try to diguise
    The fire burning in your eyes
    The hate you do not show
    Sits there and begins to grow
    Your enemies only see your mask
    You fool them with your every task
    You gently beat them down
    With little blows and silent pounds
    When they finally slip and turn their back
    You move in with a swift attack
    You let all your anger show
    There goes the final blow

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    rollerderby commented on Final Blow

    12-06-2008

    well done dear, your poem has a nice meter and rhyme scheme and though the message it gives is one of hurt, there is a finality to the pain. Keep writing!

    Vincent commented on Final Blow

    12-04-2008

    good poem, I would just suggest to fine tune the Grammer and spelling, I know this is a free style poem, Thumbs up

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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