Fleeting Moment

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  • patricialouise
  • resolving to spend more time writing as less time playing games.

Fleeting Moment

Oh those eyes,

            those eyes that hypnotize,

The touch of your hand,

            it’s heaven be dammed,

I pray for an endless night,

            or just for one more moment,

that little moment you belong to me,

            though it be a fleeting moment,

it will last an eternity.

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Sensuality commented on Fleeting Moment

08-27-2009

Like this poem short, but expressive. i think it captures what she feels inside

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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