Fleeting Moment

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  • patricialouise
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Fleeting Moment

Oh those eyes,

            those eyes that hypnotize,

The touch of your hand,

            it’s heaven be dammed,

I pray for an endless night,

            or just for one more moment,

that little moment you belong to me,

            though it be a fleeting moment,

it will last an eternity.

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Sensuality commented on Fleeting Moment

08-27-2009

Like this poem short, but expressive. i think it captures what she feels inside

To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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