Flower Girl

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    Flower Girl
    I'm just a little flower, I only have enough power to wait untill the next rain shower, how ever the beauty of waiting is my biggest fear patiently waiting for that single tear, that i seem to hold so dear, so here i stand wating for a gental hand to take me as there's for ever, in any kind of weather... FOREVER.

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    poorpoet71 commented on Flower Girl

    10-07-2009

    I have read all of your poems, but in my opinion, this is the best one by far. Less is always so much more and you seem to have that notion down pat!! Love the imagery that you present! A well deserved 10!!
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    KtIrish commented on Flower Girl

    09-24-2009

    Excellent. Its short and sweet and has a big message. Totally killer.
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    myshell

    09/24/2009

    thank you!

    Chaos128 commented on Flower Girl

    09-24-2009

    "I only have enough power to wait until the next rain shower" is as cool a line as I've ever read on this site. "Flower Girl is brief, poignant and compelling.
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    myshell

    09/24/2009

    really thank you!

    MRWORDS commented on Flower Girl

    05-26-2009

    WELL I FEEL IT WAS SHORT BUT I LIKED IT ALOT GOOD JOB! KEEP WRITING BABE! MAKE SOME LONGER ONES AS WELL!
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    myshell

    07/04/2009

    read unconditonal love its long...

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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