Unconditional Love

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    Unconditional Love

    Oh what a dream come true, leaving me filled with quit the rush, tellin myself to hush, that it could be crushed if not done right... Kinda like a kite thats waiting for its flight... So here u are in front of my face, now we must set the pace trying not to race, knowing that it couldnt ever be replaced, but so eager for that taste of pure and honest unconditanol true love, unable to deny what it is i feel so deeply inside... paientaly waiting to slip those three little words that so wants to be herd, closer to being complete, able to take a seat, knowing that i have found a friendship that has contiued its way into a beautiful patnership thats just to fit to wanna quit as we make it though our last hit filling in our empty pit, together we sit with what we only once longed for, is now side by side seeing one another working on a foundation of a creation all of our own, trying to set the tone, here at home on a natural high, Never saying good-bye only thinkin of a new way to say hi. Never leaving one another behind, as i cry for what i thought might just leave me behind never giving me the chance to comply... cause deep down im shy holding over whelming thoughts of feelings that couldnt possable be told all at once, holding enough to be enough for what ever it is we need to stay, remain and reframe from what could be gone with a blink of an eye so for you i will keep the twinkle in my eye so as long as the stars stay in th sky and the puffiest cloud has found the right sound to leave you comfortably secure inside of her, leaving one another feeling okay, even after every hey knowing exactaly what each other would of said, as they head for bed only leaving a smile to me thats all worth while...

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    dahlusion commented on Unconditional Love

    03-05-2009

    This is absolute unconditional love. So many stimulating lines like water rushing down a fall.

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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