Flowers in the Grass

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I was mad at my neighbor and it got me to thinking....

Flowers in the Grass

Flowers in the grass
some delicate
some like brass
grow together with weeds
and grass
their color and perfume
awake with
the morning dew.
Which one
are you? 

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jtlove commented on Flowers in the Grass

06-04-2010

I'd rather think life is like a avacado. You have to go through the hard shell and layers to get to the heart. Sounds like who? Sounds like you. Sounds like me! Take the time to peel back the layers and see my heart. I want to share it with you. I just need you to help me tenderly pull back those layers. Thanks.

shirl

06/04/2010

the layers can also be dirty and need to be washed off. Only the Holy /spirit and Jesus can make younew and clean! who am I compared to them?? nobody.

SuSpence commented on Flowers in the Grass

06-04-2010

haha this one made me giggle a lil with the question on the end. So clever. I really like this one, for such a short write you packed a lot into this one. I feel I am a lil of both depending on my mood haha. ~Spence

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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