F.O.C.U.S.E.D.

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F.O.C.U.S.E.D.

cant slip up; gotta stay focused
got my eye on the prize; im elevating to the next level, i kno' dis!
i can feel it,
i can taste it,
it's right in reach
sittin back n the shade; under a palm tree, on a sandy jet black beach!
yes, black dont get it twisted
im dream'n on some new shit!

gotta keep movin; cant slow down, gotta speed up the process
dodgin and duckin all aviodable mess
dont give in to stress
stay above water and take deep breathes!
i can see the finish line, now it's time to mash to the end.
wanna jump on this money train? get in!

cant slow down gotta get this mission accomplished
in your mind your thinking that there is no way around this
because you and i know both know; cant do anything wit out being FOCUSED

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graceladymn commented on F.O.C.U.S.E.D.

03-15-2009

See it become, its there, you got it. Good job.

jakkic33 commented on F.O.C.U.S.E.D.

02-10-2009

ok when you wrote this were you focused? if so on what?

Poetsheart commented on F.O.C.U.S.E.D.

12-30-2008

This is the best one of your poems I have read so far, good job.

CONFINENESS commented on F.O.C.U.S.E.D.

11-27-2008

GOOD READ

MizBlaze commented on F.O.C.U.S.E.D.

11-23-2008

I like this rhyme... True dat.

Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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