Forever Lost

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    • momoffourangels
    • is hanging out...havent really had time to write more poems but i will just give me time. Love everyone

    Forever Lost
    Forgotten sands leave my heart in tatters
    As final seconds die without help
    Within the wisdom finds dreary lanes
    Swept away by all love
    Signs of hope fire questions of faith
    Where do I go from here?
    Foreve lost without any answers
    Embellished type builds hope
    For who... All but me.
    To become... To Fall...
    Faith within walls shredded with crimson pillows
    soften the blows
    Forever lost between hope and love
    Faith can save me or can it?
    The shattered drum beats uncertain
    A slow decent to solitude
    Forever lost with no dreams
    Below the surface never to becomes ends faith
    Fire once blazing becomes love threatened.
    Life tangeled within darkness of my soul...
    Forever Lost.

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    dahlusion commented on Forever Lost

    06-02-2009

    "Life tangled within darkness of my soul... " —— I love how deeply poetic this line is. To be forever lost without answers is to not know thy self. Sit in "stillness and silence", it grows such sweet things in the mind, flooding into the body, and over flowing the soul with light. Peace.
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    whendt commented on Forever Lost

    05-26-2009

    beautiful words woven it time. This kind of makes you feel sad , but I think it was meant to right? Anyway I like your writing style. Kelley
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    WordSlinger commented on Forever Lost

    03-16-2009

    Faith can save ya, nice poem
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    Phoenix9 commented on Forever Lost

    12-11-2008

    well written and full of emotion that flows with every word.
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    rollerderby commented on Forever Lost

    12-05-2008

    Well done my dear. But I can see the pain written in every word. Though the message it conveys is dark, with love there is always hope. Because without love, what are we? Thanks for sharing!
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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