Forever more

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    Forever more

    Walk with me through endless wood;
    Walk into night's gentle caress.
    I take thee, Mistress of Beauty;
    Clothed in only midnight's dress.
    come and we shall be taken;
    One in another's embrace;
    I long to only be with you;
    Eternally, you on my lips I taste.
    A bed of night we lay upon,
    With dreams and fantasy to be fulfilled;
    Bathed in the gentle light of star,
    This feeling in us both does build.
    Come with me, we both shall go;
    Ecstaticly lost into OUR own place.
    Our world in which there are none but us;
    Even with eyes closed I see your face.
    Forever immortal in my mind,
    With beauty matched by none before;
    Nothing can compare to the thought of you
    or the love I'll fell forevermore....

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    mamasan commented on Forever more

    12-05-2009

    wow this is real wordcrafting for sure and its obviously your talent is showing...........I look forward to reading more of your works.

    FranzJ commented on Forever more

    10-23-2009

    nice - i am a fellow fire firefighter (retired in July) i will be submitting some other thinkd soon

    dahlusion commented on Forever more

    01-23-2009

    Lovely!

    drewking commented on Forever more

    12-28-2008

    well written, enjoyed reading this one..

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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