FREE ?

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    FREE ?

    MUD AND DIRT ALL AROUND
    A QUIET PLACE TO REST
    SIX FEET UNDER GROUND
    AS THE BUGS BEGIN TO NEST

    DARK, WET AND COLD
    ALL ALONE IN THIS SMALL SPACE
    AS MY BODY GROWS OLD
    AND MY MIND BEGINS TO RACE

    DO THEY WONDER DO THEY CARE
    WITH THE AIR THEIR BREATHING
    IS THIS EVEN FARE
    AS MY SOUL BEGINS LEAVING

    KNOWING I'VE DONE WRONG
    LEAVING BEHIND THE BROKEN PARTS
    THIS IS WHERE I BELONG
    THOUGH THERE WILL BE MANY EMPTY HEARTS

    NOW AS I CLOSE MY EYES
    I'M SEEING THE LIGHT SO BRIGHT
    MY BODY BEGINS TO RISE
    THEN FADES PLAIN OUT OF SIGHT

    AM I HERE AM I GONE
    WHAT IS LEFT OF ME
    CAN THEY CARRY ON
    WITHOUT THE LIFE THEY CAN'T SEE

    THERE ONCE WAS LOVE
    TILL THE BODY WENT COLD
    MY SOUL IS FREE AS A DOVE
    FLYING SO HIGH STRONG AND BOLD

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    sequelrio commented on FREE ?

    07-08-2010

    I really enjoyed reading this, It makes you think how important time spent with your loved ones is!

    markrohaley commented on FREE ?

    01-29-2009

    woe ! where did this come from ! ? :)

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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