Give you all of me..What exactly can that be?

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    Give you all of me..What exactly can that be?

    Is it my heart?.. the thing that keeps me living but can kill me if it's broken
    Is it my mind?.. the thing that keeps me focused but sometimes steer me wrong
    Is it my hands?.. the things that are sometimes soft and can sometimes be a little rough
    Is it my body?.. sexy to look at but taken for granted by those you trust the most
    Is it my feet?.. want to be aroung happiness but run at the first sign of pain
    Is it my lips?.. appealing to the eye but words spoken through them are followed by a sigh
    Is it my eyes?.. often gazing into thought and telling my life history if looked into deeply
    Is it my nose?.. helps to detect bad aroma but not bad encounters with love
    Is it my hair?.. a Woman's beauty and yet not appreciated when grown from the root
    Is it my arms?.. able to hold you tightly at times but wave goodbye instantly
    Is it my feet?.. can walk through the fire for what matters the most but hesitate to take the walk towards emotions

    Here is all of me...Do you still feel the same after what you see?

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    ginga commented on Give you all of me..What exactly can that be?

    08-28-2009

    mentality, This is an interestingly stated and questioning poem. I like how sincere and frank you are and how you are trying to discover things about yourself by asking another. Excellent! ginga

    debb commented on Give you all of me..What exactly can that be?

    07-14-2009

    Oh i thought that was beautiful. it seems like thats from your heart.

    YQUS commented on Give you all of me..What exactly can that be?

    12-18-2008

    i'm digging this.

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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