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Giving Up

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Death

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cierrabb
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Giving Up

Bleeding through my veins
Like a bullet in my brain
Blood rushing down my arms
Wondering when it will end
Wanting to leave so fast,
Looking at my blood run down the glass
Leaving a trail behind
Just wanting my life to rewind
Seeing the light,
Wanting it so dear
Never had the courage
Only fear.

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IAMLIKEU commented on Giving Up 05-16-2009: I HAVE FELT LIKE THAT ONLY NEVER PUT IN VERSE. YOU HAVE MORE COURAGE THAN YOU THINK.; Reply to Comment

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Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.
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