GOD

jesus you love me so much,i dont know why you do
its finally safe to say,that i love you to
you brought me through the rain,when i was felling blue
you brought me through the light,to be closer to you
when i was down in the dump,smoking on some weed
i looked up to you,and then you brought me to my knees
i dont look back,and i dont think twice
just for you lord,i'll give you my life
judgement day is coming,and you better get ready
get rid of those sins,and dont keep them heavy
just think of the world come to an end
last minute people dying trying to get rid of those sins
im not a fool i keep it cool,all the way to the church
jesus you love me so much and you know what im worth
so get up and clap and stand for his name
we need to praise god and puut the devil to shame

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ccslim commented on GOD

04-27-2009

U can ditch this after I speak but brother I felt the heartbeat! All cool if you do but man this flies with more time to edit with your best. Editors still use red ink/ pinkish highlights send it back to redo it anyways. Note: tight flow down to the point I'll give you my life Space then New stanza; When you start with a low second stanza also low then follow with a high with power aka uppercut sucka hehehe Or flip if you like. I think this needs another stanza of hit again blues then triump

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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