~ GOD'S BREATH ~

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    ~ GOD'S BREATH ~

    GOD'S BREATH


    Ignites the Cacophony of Life of HIS creative

    expressions of HIS Love for man

    He speaks and planets are basking in silent basin

    shaped depressions

    Stars are taking pictures to stop the motions of time

    All Life is birthed making it's mark on the

    tablets of the earth

    Time goes on dancing to it's own special tune

    HE breathes and the Suns rays are emanating to the

    hungry embryos waiting

    He winks and night time desends on all

    Oh the LOVE of GOD for man

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    ccslim commented on ~ GOD'S BREATH ~

    09-14-2009

    I really like this but sort of confused with the mix of present and past tenses and the "of" usage. Maybe I am pausing all wrong because I'm subconsciously deleting in my mind some ING's. Content awesome! Is is forever as by is by his hands alone!
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    angel3337

    04/12/2010

    Thank you very much for your thoughts, I will truly reflect on them....

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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